That was...strange. To say the least. Although I did enjoy it. Thumbs up. :D

The beginning was clever. Very good imagery and character interaction. Overall, this is an adorable story. :D

Aww, that was so incredibly cute. It was so Kawaii, I loved it XD

Aw, the poor kitty! I tend to forget summaries right when I click on a story... but even when I read the cute that was the kitty I KNEW something bad was going to happen! DX

Hehe, that was funny. Wow... Val going through such a scheme when she could have just told Riki he couldn't cook. I was actually thinking he WAS insane until she blatantly told Riki about Jeremy's "affair".

Only thing I noticed was the phone conversation. The slashes don't really work, maybe you should stick with quotation marks and just italicize the other end of the phone conversational person? lol.

Keep it up! :}

I really enjoyed it. I't quite cute and adorable really. And it's funny reading about Riki in the pink apron and trying to cook. The cat's death was hilarious. I like the way you write and everything is so...well...adorable once again. :)

Aw the ending was sweet. I feel so bad for the kitty. He just wanted attention and some food and what he got was death. I found what Val did was messed up, she made it that complicated just to tell him he can't cook XD I love the summary for your story, it made it seem like the meat pie was made from the kitty :P Good story cuz. And yay finally a finished one *huggy*

wow this was really funny! i'm sad for tink of course but it's still a laugh riot! personally my favorite character is Valentine,i love thoses type of characters.

so your really Bengali? your really quick ya know that PM was in my inbox strait after i faved this. and if you wanted a Bengali's opinion, i think this is awesome! And if your talking about an opinion cuz it's yaoi then i sorta understand cuz my rents are always saying how it's wrong to be homo. yea, not like i care much (gay guys really are usually hot. yea i really liked this fic, and if you have more stuff like this i love to read you stories!

lulz. I'd have to say that's the funniest thing I've seen out there out of reading all the slashes I have. x'D Kudos to you.

Strange but funny. . . Riki isn't really crazy is he?

Sweet and cute but Oh poor Tink.

Aw ^.^ I LOVE IT! Those two are so cute =]

but the poor cat *sniffsniff* why did it have to die *mourning*

I still

Ahh that was so good! It had me smiling the whole way through! I love both the guys characters, and espescially the ending...It was great :)

OMG LAWL. Yeah, seriously. When the cat actually died of poisoning... I think I was going to laugh myself into a coma or something. Even though I love cats.
This whole story was very cute. Kudos :P

lol I found that entertaining :P it's going to my faves :D

Ta!

Keep Rockin

~karlz