i love this
as with all your work
sorry ive been a bit behind on my reviewing.
Excellent job.

You end the piece with a period. That bothers me because it was not all one long sentence. I also think there should have at least some hint to abuse earlier in the piece, rather just throwing it at the end. I mean until the end it seems like he's only guilty of cheating.

Anyhow, I do like the piece, it's a bit cliche, but you still make a powerful piece and it flows well.

PS If you're bored this weekend check out the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)