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| Shaterd Plastick Hart 2008-11-06 ch 1,   | I know your probibly getting tired of me writing revews but I love them so much. They are how I feel. Espeshaly this one. Only my scars are inside. It is how I felt when he left. I felt like I was sloly sufficating. And if I could have I would have climed the harshest mountans, and swim through the oceans. |
| Creative Jenius 2008-10-18 ch 1, | Oh, how sadly sweet. I like how much this poem indirectly centers the subject of scars. The way you wrote it, whoever it's written about, it's like that person marked you and made you theirs - they scarred you literally and figuratively. I really liked that. And after they claimed ownership, they left you. And no one else can own you because they technically still do. Haha, maybe I'm over analyzing, but I like this a lot. Great job (: Katie |
| Lost Among the Stars 2008-10-04 ch 1, | I really liked this poem and can totally relate to it. Good job! :) |
| iloveanimecartoons 2008-09-14 ch 1, | Wow... Um...yeah... This can mean at least 2 or 3 things to me so I'll just comment overall (hate interprting poetry wrong). GAWD, this reads like lyrics! I could SO hear a bass riff, violins, piano, drums...a mini symphony in the background to accompany these...these...words of yearning and angst. And my heart whimpered for just a second. Okay, more like 2 or TEN minutes! Man, you know how to get me all sentimental and reminiscent, JFK! I LOVE the line "because the air is starting to suffocate" so much! I LOVE a profound oxymoron! Gets my neurons going! This was worth the instant re-read and I'm VERY sure I'll be revisiting this oen in the future! Brava! |