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| Doc Blood 2008-08-24 ch 1,   | This was quite good. I especially liked the lines "cranial container," and "walls of bone." I've had no formal training in poetry (or writing in general,) but I think this would work better without the italicized words and phrases. Well done. Peace, Doc |