This is good. It shows many sides of love, hate, passion, and passionlessness.
My favorite line would have to be:
(Who knew vulgarity could be so poetic?)
Good job.

Woah. Hmm, not sure what to say, but I love it. Make a whole song out of it? Love the last stanza the most.

Very raw, true, and poetic. I loved it. Good work. :)