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| aberlemno 2008-08-27 ch 1,   | I really like this. The lines "Betwixt the script. Why not betwixt the lines? The script was on the lines, so... never mind it." - can't put my finger on exactly what but something about them is wonderful. Overall it's a very classy piece. Couple of possible grammar mistakes but I hardly think that's important in the big scheme of things. And it is a lovely image, great idea :) |