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| someone's sideshow 2008-08-24 ch 1,   | Excellently done. I did catch a typo in the 24th sentence ("weak" instead of "week"). I think you did a wonderful job sticking to the criteria and making the story your own, with its own elegant style. I liked it a lot. |
| Landcaster 2008-08-24 ch 1, | Magnifique! Aha, this was really well done considering the criteria. It was a bit hard to understand, but I've done stuff like this too that was just a muddle of nonsense, so I give you massive credit.Well-written anyways. Keep up the good work! :) |