Argh. I can usually spell. But seriously "crepy"?! WTF! (that was misspelt on And how I ran... Which I LOVE!) Hahah this is so cool. I really like it! Write more, fast. Don't you hate how long it takes people to put stuff on here?!

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bella.

Oh my good god. That is no-lie the BEST story beginning I've read on fictionpress in years of being here. The BEST. That was an utterly amazing way to start. Fantastic detail, great humor, and perfect grammar and spelling. I usually skip through some details and paragraphs in what I read, but in this my eyes were glued to this the whole time, every word. :) I LOVE IT. Absolutely amazing. Pleasepleaseplease update when you can :):) I love the characters, the story, everything. And Conor and Elaina are utterly adorable together. With your detail I could perfectly picture every bit of it. Keep it up :)
-GN Perone