Ooh, I know how this feels. I Leave EVERYTHING to the very last minute. I swear all my English 1 essay were started and finished the day they were due.

I love your rhymes. They seem to flow very easily and smoothly. I'm afraid I can't get into much deeper, technical critiques. If there's any form of literature I just can't understand the mechanics of, it's poetry. But I do know that I like it!

The bit about the cat is cute. And I love "The Greeks and philosophers have nothing on me" bit at the end of fourth block. Heh. You seem to be a pretty good writer. I hope you have other things for me to look at!