Th ebeginning is confusing, to say teh least, but the ending is sweet. You should try and make this an actual story. Sweet things like this get read. But if you make it a story, make sure you are a bit more spacific as to where they are and what they are doing.

Aw! This is sweet and to the point. I love stories like that. Although, I'm not too sure where they are, snuggled under a blanket with other people around? It doesn't really matter though, all that matters is this story is adorable and you're an excellent author.

Ah, very good. I like the way it tied into the title.

- Koki