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| SashaRihanna 2008-11-17 ch 13,   | More. Now. Absolutely loved it! |
| Bigego 2008-11-16 ch 1, | good story so far :) i like how this story isn't rushing into things. it's taking its time yet it's not slow and draggy |
| Jevanminx 2008-11-14 ch 13, | Aw, he actually died, go Lauren on saving him, so glad they are both alright. JM |
| Jevanminx 2008-11-08 ch 12, | OMG How the hell can that boy do that, what the ** was he thinking. Go Jason I can't believe he jumped in after her, please say he lives. JM |
| lilblondi0309 2008-11-04 ch 10, | So I've become quite the fan of this story. Hurry up with that next chapter! I don't like this new Lauren! Can't wait to see how you pull her out of this rut. --Lynn |
| Irene 2008-10-27 ch 10, | You finally get your review... Okay, I could be nitpicky and point out every little mistake, but I won't. However, I will object to the argument in chapter seven about animals and emotions. But I'll save that for school... It's probably about time I said something useful, or at least complimentary. I liked it, except that bit in chapter ten where they were together and then not together, because that was just annoying. |
| Jevanminx 2008-10-23 ch 10, | Oh damn him, Jason you are an idiot damn it. JM |
| Jevanminx 2008-10-12 ch 9, | Slightly gross there, for getting his arm trapped in a wall, but well done Lauren for sorting it, and we got a better view of his feelings for her too. JM |
| fantasy4luvr 2008-10-10 ch 8, | great storyline :D i really like it so far update soon pls haha..poor jason |
| Jevanminx 2008-10-09 ch 8, | Aw yay, then no, hehehehe, damn it he made her cry, and after such a sweet kiss too. JM |
| Cold War Kid 2008-10-09 ch 8, | i like it a lot! i can't wait to read more! :) |
| Jevanminx 2008-10-07 ch 7, | So so close in that last chapter, she has definitely taken a liking to him, and he to her cant wait for it to develop further. |
| Jevanminx 2008-09-21 ch 5, | Oh, be interesting to see what happens between those two now. JM |
| Jevanminx 2008-09-02 ch 4, | Oh, cool plot line, I like the building up of the tension between Jason and Lauren, very good. JM |
| lilblondi0309 2008-08-28 ch 3, | Very nice so far. I like how Jason doesn't immediately feel attracted to any of the girls and is, in fact, annoyed by them, nice touch. Lauren's actions seem a little bit all over the chart but maybe that's the type of person she is. All in all very nice work so far. I look forward to reading more :] --Lynn |