Really powerful descriptions and very unique to which is hard to do because mirrors/glass are written about often. I also like the imagery in the last two lines. Beautiful piece.

Aside from the fact that the first line is repeated twice, I liked the imagery a lot and found the last line to be an interesting twist. Nice work =]

I liked it, a vivid picture in my mind! But, the last line, it threw off the whole thing, i think, for me.