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dimethylmercury 2009-07-02 . chapter 1
Cute story(: And LOL at the 'Warnie'.

By the way, in the line 'You’re conscience is a **', it should be your. Yep(:
P.F Ally 2009-07-01 . chapter 1
LOL. XD "uh...mostly it's my conscience yelling at me." PRICELESS.
Green Eyed Angel 2008-09-12 . chapter 1
aww... that's so cute and funny and what not. The conscience is so hilarious, and the "little voice that sounds like him" is quite serious, like her dad or something. It's so cute! Favorited.
NocturnalSong 2008-08-26 . chapter 1
I liked it... It's very fluffy and cute.. I'm one of those people who barely ever review lol, I can be so lazy... It's every girl's dream for that to happen...:) I loved the conscience, Warnie Matson haha. I also like how the boy's name is never mentioned...Air of mysteriousness :)

Just one thing..

You’re conscience is a **
You're => Your.

Sorry... Grammar freak lol. But It was great over all. Original!

Please review my story, Tripping over you, If you ever have the time... I hate that I'm shamefully(not shamelessly lol) promoting it, but I'd really love it If you would read, and perhaps even review!
SapphireEyes16 2008-08-26 . chapter 1
this one shot is really sweet, itz in my faves!
The Revolution's Child 2008-08-25 . chapter 1
Very, very cute.
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