I love you for writing such an awesome story...I love myself for getting addicted to it..!! ;))

I guess the above lines said it all...fantastic, superb..!!

awsome story...oove it tell nw...d plot is beautiful...!! :))

I am so engrossein the story dst can't take d pain to log in n review

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Strawberrycrush

This was too cute, I absolutely loved it. I'm glad everything worked out in the end, and the whole entire Jess going to a mental hospital thing is just hilarious to me. Good job :)

hey nice story ^^

Dramatic story but I liked it. You did a wonderful job.

Psycho **!

Oh my god, what a **! I can't believe Jess did that! that's taking it to the extreme! Great story tho!

This was a really great story! I enjoyed reading every word! :)

Its a good story, but it doesnt really seem realistic.
But i still love it!!

Wow! very dramatic story!

I hate to be negative but I have some neagtive things to say :/

I think you have just too much sex and violence going on here. Kris is tripped by brandon, attacked by Jordan and beaten by Jess. The whole school knows about her sex life . . . Talk about a bad week! It is just too dramtic imo.

I think the story might have been stronger without flip flopping point of view, I am not totally sure. But I think 1 point of view would lead to better character development. The number one biggest problem I have with this story is that, at least until this point, (chap 20) Kris didn't go to the police. She comes off as the kind of girl who doesn't take much ** but she is constantly being a victim. If she is going to be a victim that should be part of her personality, she should slink away from Jess in the 1st chapter not stand up to her.

The reason I am wasting my time saying all this is becuase I do like the concept of this story and think you have a lot of talent, but this just doesn't ring true to anythign cloe to real life and isn't out there enough to be a satire.

I have only seen like 2 episodes of gossip girl but this is what it reminds me of, and I am sorry to say that isn't a compliment.

Also in real teenage lives there are parents in the picture. If I had a daugher who was just beaten unconscious I would FORCE her to tell me who did it or put her under house arrest. Her dad is totally uncaring. I supose I am judging this story harshly because it isn't what I want it to be and that is unfair but you could have dramatic elements and not have them come off as cheesy.

um mix up with names here, "Jared stepped in front of his sister. “Just leave them alone"" got a bit confused. :D

This is an amazing story but really sad and kinda heartbreaking. It keeps me wanting to read more. It's suspenseful.

Another great story as always I love the story and the characters. I noticed on your page the story Complete Disaster is coming soon and it sounds interresting. Can't wait! Keep up the good work.

i really liked the story!! the freaky jess thing was a good twist!
charlotte

i really like the story!! theres only 1 thing bothering me! u changed Jordan's name to Jared in this chapter!!
charlotte