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Reviews For: Suspension

Summer Frost
2008-09-12
ch 1,
very sweet
heart'sespionage
2008-09-04
ch 1,
you shocked me at the end. i just feel that with all the beautiful imagery you lead me back into the mundane

"But today, I am fine with just laying,
Neither laying somewhere real,
Somewhere divine,
Nor suspended within time,

I am fine."

not that that's a bad thing, the rhyme works and it definitely leaves an interesting effect
doxology
2008-09-01
ch 1,
I adore this. It just flows and flows and flows and then the last line just smacks you in the face. I LOVE the last line. And the poem as a whole.

Cheers,

Doxology
NEStitch
2008-08-29
ch 1,
hm *smiles* so serene.

sorry, I know that doesn't mean much, but I thought i'd share that particular feeling
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