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| Summer Frost 2008-09-12 ch 1,   | very sweet |
| heart'sespionage 2008-09-04 ch 1, | you shocked me at the end. i just feel that with all the beautiful imagery you lead me back into the mundane "But today, I am fine with just laying, Neither laying somewhere real, Somewhere divine, Nor suspended within time, I am fine." not that that's a bad thing, the rhyme works and it definitely leaves an interesting effect |
| doxology 2008-09-01 ch 1, | I adore this. It just flows and flows and flows and then the last line just smacks you in the face. I LOVE the last line. And the poem as a whole. Cheers, Doxology |
| NEStitch 2008-08-29 ch 1, | hm *smiles* so serene. sorry, I know that doesn't mean much, but I thought i'd share that particular feeling |