Good chapter, Gup-chan!
I think the girl is falling for her master. That would sulk
xDD

update soon!

awesome! nice start btw!

Oh, I'm feeling dread for the upcoming events and Silenciaricus

Poor Angel...

ah! I love it! It's a little jumpy at first, but still freaking awesome. write more please. and I'll try to get Midnight Heartbreak up soon, just hang in there, thanks for the reviews :]

His brother--interesting. I love the way Michael gets on dear Millael's nerves. And it's intriguing the way you gave both of them angel or angel-esque names. Foreshadowing?
Osprey

ok heres the thing: THIS STORY ROCKS continue writing if its the last thing you do!

ok little confusing but it is a very very good story!

Gah!
Pul-lease continue!
ish really good!!

I love your writing so much! You have such a wonderful, imaginative style--it sort of reminds me of the dialogue in some mangas I've read.
Osprey

P.S. Are you really from The Netherlands? I've been meaning to ask for awhile.

love it

awesome chapter! i think you're writing is improving, keep it up. :3

'Teacher takes my hand and brings me to somewhere.'

This is a week sentence, be more specific. Something like 'Teacher takes me to a room with white walls' ... would do the job.

'my sanity disappears'. Dramatic, but it could be a little better. For example 'my sanity slips from me'

Great chapter. The Demon king looks even more evil but the angelic realm looks pathetic - how will the poor little angel cope? I loved the section where she even owns her seperation from the angelic realm by telling them they have no power over her - maybe that will be to her benefit one day?

"You can bring one slave together with you." This sentence is a bit awkward, leave out 'together' and it would make more sense.

Also, I'm a little confused about the pendant. It's hidden between the wings? At the back? I just can't picture this.

But otherwise, a great chapter and I like the implication of a relationship between the two other slaves. Of course I can see where this is heading. I'm a little worried about the theme (submissive female, powerful male). But only because I want you to be a well ajusted person. LOL I'm happy to read about it.