loved the last thought. your second person is good.

Really beautiful, and well written.
I love stories that are written in second person.
Great job, :)

Wow. That was really good. I liked the point of view you set it in because it makes the entirity of the story more real and more understandable. The reader is able to understand Joanne and where's she's coming from when she decides to let Zach love her the way she remembers, the way she needs.

You're a great writer. I hope you decide to keep up with it.

You're a fantastic author.
My humble opinion:
You write more.

Heya. I really liked that! In one short chapter you manage to make us feel something for the characters which is pretty hard to do. It is brill!!
xDawnx