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| Reviews for Small lies |
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   Averybarbarian 10/24/08 . chapter 1"Why did the silence become our last words?" This line is so powerfull! 'Tis so heartrendering and so much sorrow! Well done I enjoyed this piece. |
| May Elizabeth 10/7/08 . chapter 1 Again very relatable. Peace. |
| Anex .B. Cougar 9/15/08 . chapter 1 everybody lies, its one of those sad facts of life in the end though love if its true will pull you though |
| Zenith Void 9/10/08 . chapter 1 Wow... that was really good. Lol, I really liked the ending. |
| simpleplan13 9/6/08 . chapter 1 I like the idea here, very relateable. The descriptions are really great, though bees don't really like roses that I know of... Still it was a bittersweet piece. |
| Unknown Survivor 9/1/08 . chapter 1 Very relatable. Nice work on this. Unknown Survivor |
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 8/31/08 . chapter 1 Love this! I can relate. Adding to C2 awsome job! |
| Counting Petals 8/28/08 . chapter 1 I loved the first stanza - that really jumped out at me. Nicely done ) |
| Hope's Demise 8/28/08 . chapter 1 this is cool. I really like it! |
| Scarlett Wynter 8/26/08 . chapter 1 "you learned to say 'i love you' even if you didn't mean it" - that line really stuck with me. Great work on this. |
| Isca 8/26/08 . chapter 1 "Why did the silence become our last words?" Aww! So sad! I loved the last part. Great work! :) |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 8/26/08 . chapter 1 このポエムはよかったですよ。ちょっとなかいです、けどよかったメッセージです。ふかいぶんで、いいメタフォールです！がんばって、ね！ The Reverse Edge Blade |
