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| TheGuitarBeaver 2008-11-12 ch 5,   | cool, great idea and plot, updating anytime soon? |
| i love life 2008-09-25 ch 5, | funny update soon pls |
| Summer Frost 2008-09-08 ch 5, | this is like whoa |
| Ravestna 2008-09-04 ch 5, | i liked this chapter, does make sense that Adriano thinks Chris is secretly gay. can't wait for the next chapter x X xRavestnax X x |
| msallaroundperfect 2008-09-03 ch 5, | hey great chapter update soon, i just knew that he knew it was her... |
| broken.string14 2008-09-03 ch 5, | THis story is amaxxing! |
| ShatteredLoveBrokenDreams 2008-09-03 ch 5, | Hah, I love Adriano. He's so sarcastic. Sarcastic people are nice... Off-topic though. Christina really does make a good guy. She's a bit obsessed with getting Adriano to love her, though. As a girl I mean. (I sound like such an idiot right now, sorry.) Her point of view flows well, and it's all very clear where they're at during each point in the chapter. I have a question though, and if you already answered it then sorry. How far away is this school from her house--is it a long drive just to get her there? I like knowing little things, sorry. Again though, good chapter. ^^ ~Kira |
| msallaroundperfect 2008-09-01 ch 4, | what's his secret... tell me tell me and update soon...! |
| vIE-TeNDRe 2008-09-01 ch 4, | omg what does he mean...'I know your secret' ?!?!?! does he know that its christina or just something like i know your gay or i know you want me to teach you how to skateboard or something?? omg you soo can't leave us all hanging at the edge of our seats please!! update soon!! i ned to know what's gonna happen! it's like a must know thing so update ASAP!! thanx vIE-TeNDRe |
| ShatteredLoveBrokenDreams 2008-09-01 ch 4, | Haha, great chapter. ^.^ It was very amusing, to say the least. "OMG THERE'S A GUY IN THE GIRL'S RESTROOM!" That one had me laughing. *lol* And her mom seems like a pretty neat person, if I do say so myself. Great cliffy as well. Update soon! Oh, and chapter 3 was also good; I just read both of them since I haven't had time to before now. ^^ |
| Ravestna 2008-09-01 ch 4, | i'm gussing he doesn't know that he's a girl cause it only a few chapters in, but i could be wrong, i want to know what the secret is |
| broken.string14 2008-08-31 ch 4, | Oh. Em. GEE! Write more, PLEASE! I love your story! |
| broken.string14 2008-08-30 ch 3, | DUDE! Write more! I absolutely cannot wait until you update! Very clever plot. :) |
| Ravestna 2008-08-30 ch 3, | i wonder how she gets into the skl. |
| Ravestna 2008-08-30 ch 2, | can't wait till next chapter |