oh I loved it. The suspense was great and that ending is so very nicely ambiguous. :)

Great job.

Hoo! Have I told you that I think you are a master of suspense? Well, you are. I love your suspense, and I wish you would write more! You just leave me hangin'! More more MORE! ^_-
~Ara

this was a really good piece. It's different. I like how there's only one spoken part, and the rest is detail. This is different from your usual stories, and it's a nice bit. You did awesome.

A plus,

Tasse (or Victoria. Whichever.)