Happy late birthday :) it's only 3 days since you're birthday.

It was good :) a nice fluffy story. Just wish that you added some chapters in between 2 and 3 and madeair a short story. Also, in chapter 2, during Agnes's order, you write paper instead of pepper.

Lovely story, i like the simplicity of the idea but it worked out well! I did get a little confused in the second chapter with the whole Jordan-Merry conversation which I think needs a little expanding...Other than that, a few typos and "he dreamed with my number" doesn't work. I think it should be "he dreamed of my number"
Love the ending!
Look forward to reading more of your stuff.

haha. this story was really cute. :D

Happy Very Late Birthday! good story by the way...i wonder what actually happened to the real couple though lol i think that i would be totally freaked out if some random person called me to say they dreamed my number :D

Aw, I like this very much. I love fate meetings, they always make a story catching. Good story!

Man, I was just about laughing my ass off at the end of the second part, when Angus told her boss that they were a couple. Priceless! It's a sweet, little story, kind of works to cut things short and not make so much out of it. I liked it. Hm, especially all the things she called him XD He really is obsessive-compulsive.

-Kanilla

Great second chapter; I love getting to know her! Can't wait for the conclusion; with an ending like that, I hope it's soon!

Once again, happy b-day. Loved the chapter. Please update soon.

I KNEW IT! Lol, I loved the chapter. Please update soon.
--Amanda

nice, really nice

Great idea! It is truly inventive, especially since it's inspired by real life! Can't wait to read the finer details, as you think them up!

That was a really good story. I liked it. Please update soon.
My guess is the chick that answered the phone is the waitress...
--AMS