As Devin told you, I was on a walk with my mother and have returned to read this. Just like I promised. You probably think we're crazy, talking through reviews, but Devin often likes to speak for me and usually, I tend to follow through because I find I can never really deny her of what she wants.

So... I read this. And I'm nothing short of in love with it. It's sad because it's so true, because something like this happens every day, whether it be the casual brush of fingertips, a slight nudge as you walk down your school hallway, or maybe even getting hit in the side with a too-large and way too-heavy backpack at school. Which I'd like to add, happened to me just today. I have no battle scars to prove it, but I assume you don't want to know anyway, so I'll shut up now.

But yes, back to my not-so-obvious point. I enjoyed this. Immensely. It's perfect in its utter imperfect situation.

Wow, this was slightly amazing. I can't explain the feelings it brought up in me, however. I've been a bit less than articulate, lately, so forgive me.
But, on the plus side, I can hoenstly say that I don't think it needs work. I think it's kind of perfect in that horrible-because-it-feels-so-sadly-real kind of way. (And that's a good thing, btw.)
The last line is sad.

I sent el vinculo to my friend, Katlin. She's going to read it when she gets back from a walk con su madre.