its a little confusing to read, but its actually a cool and unique way to read a story... :) update soon please

want more! I love how this is done. It is very teenage, since teenagers live on their phones and the internet (i should know...)

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Ah, I love this chapter. I remember reading some other story written in the same format and not liking it. Some reason, yours clicks and that's why it's amazing. Keep it up.

this was amazing.

i love how its in IMs and texts.

its really good update soon.

oh this is very interesting! can't wait to read more!

Aw, loved it, made me smile!

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Keep on updating , yeah?

Jess x

I like it so far. :) i like how you're writing it.

Continue please.

I like the idea of writing your story through IMs and texts, but I'm curious as to how you're going to develop the plot and the characters without any stuff in between. Interesting idea!

Have you ever read "The Boy Next Door" by Meg Cabot? It's similar in that it's told through e-mails, but there is also dialogue, etc. in between them to flesh out the story. Maybe if you get stuck you could consider doing something like that. I imagine it might get tough without the other things to tie the conversations together.

Anyways, you probably know what you're doing. And I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes!

-Andee

This is interesting, in a good way! I'm really looking forward to seeing how it'll play out. It's new, keep it up.

o scandel. i love this, and the idea of writing it in that way is awesome. good job :)