Normally, I'm not a fan of stories written from the first person point of view. In fact, at the first sign of it, I normally move on to the next story.

Not so this time. I found the light, conversational tone of chapter 1 to be quite good, and an effective set up of what sounded like it could be an intriguing story.

I didn't care for Chapter 2 as much, the vibe was still there, only it seemed a bit more forced.

All that said: I plan on reading this as long as you keep writing it.

cool i really liked it! The easy-going tone of it is apealing and his 'spaced out'moment reminded me of Scrubs haha keep it up!