| Reviews for Blue Box |
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Dormio 9/13/08 . chapter 1Nice collection of haikus. I think Jeans is my favorite of them all, and I can relate to Mother ;) |
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 6huzzah! this is completely awesome. nice job! keep writing:) |
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 5he he very nice. i would have to agree. may i suggest watching a happy musical? |
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 4o i like the concept of this one, with the branches waving. nice personification. |
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 3i think that this is a good message for 'angsty teens'. |
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 2reminds me of the sisterhood of the traveling pants kinda |
BellaEzrebetFang 8/29/08 . chapter 1Hm, I think I might need one of those blue boxes... I find my extra thoughts are usually astray... |
Doc Blood 8/28/08 . chapter 1I like the thoughts behind your haiku. "Blue Box" is similar to, but much more positive than my own "Box of Gone." "Jeans" is very good, especially the ambiguity of the word(s) "tears." Well done. Peace, Doc |
kloun mannequin 8/28/08 . chapter 4I really like these haikus, they're good. |