Reviews for Blue Box
Dormio 9/13/08 . chapter 1
Nice collection of haikus. I think Jeans is my favorite of them all, and I can relate to Mother ;)
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 6
huzzah! this is completely awesome. nice job! keep writing:)
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 5
he he very nice. i would have to agree. may i suggest watching a happy musical?
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 4
o i like the concept of this one, with the branches waving. nice personification.
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 3
i think that this is a good message for 'angsty teens'.
fatbird33 9/7/08 . chapter 2
reminds me of the sisterhood of the traveling pants kinda
BellaEzrebetFang 8/29/08 . chapter 1
Hm, I think I might need one of those blue boxes...

I find my extra thoughts are usually astray...
Doc Blood 8/28/08 . chapter 1
I like the thoughts behind your haiku. "Blue Box" is similar to, but much more positive than my own "Box of Gone." "Jeans" is very good, especially the ambiguity of the word(s) "tears." Well done.

Peace, Doc
kloun mannequin 8/28/08 . chapter 4
I really like these haikus, they're good.