Holy crap ... wow *deep breath* *release* ... just ... wow.

holy **. wow.
okay, so that was amazing. and now i must carry onto the next chapter. it is so hard to come across something so well written. wow.

Quite sincerely, I'm amazed by your story, it's the best I've read in a while. Usually I'm not into short stories but yours is really something. And don't bother if there happen to be any mistakes because when I started to read I got too caught with the beauty of your style to even notice. I like your writing, I like the elegance within its darkness and hope you'll write more.

I remember when you send me this (in exchange for some smut maybe? XD) I've reread it. It's too good to only read once, after all! I loved it as much as I did the first time, and I remember Marcus~ He was sexy -_- We need to rpg maybe again sometimes and see where it takes us.

I'm off to read the sequel now. I almost squealed when I saw it :P

-Bratwo

lol very well written...i liked it...

and we are all obsessed with something, im glad to see that yours is vampires..makes the best stories imo =)