I swear, I can't wait till you get back to the point that you were in when you posted on quizilla... I was dying for a while and now I will wait patiently to see what happens.

It was good, but I think one of my favorite chapters is coming up soon, so I'm anticipating it.

mwahahaha. i read this story on your quizilla account, so im just gonna pop in and check time to time when you're upto the part that i was upto! ;D hehehee. update soon! and i dnt see the difference between this chapter, and the utha one u posted..??

aha i love the next chapter, same with this one :)

phew for a second there I thoght it was Paris screaming and I was worried about little Devin. Derek's being a big meany! :( Can't wait to read about their excrutiating night! Update as soon as possible :)

wow who was that guy after her? Shocker and her i was thinking it was her mom who was kelseys mom too! hope we get to meet her sis. I can tell she's already falling for the guy! update soon!

plz plz plz update!!

swet. i like...im guessin therz more to kelsey. and derek seems realli nice...mann, hez gna get cutt..!!

hayy, i like navy blue!! loll. ouch @ derek.

I love this story so much!
Hurry up and update!
I appreciate it!
Your new faithful fan,
truebleu

Ooh a side mission. It's getting more interesting!

Aww, I'm so sad that I only have 3 more chapters to go. Yay, they're going on a date! Update soon!

Yep, Kelsey's my new favorite person, besides Laretta and Derek. Great chapter!

I like Kelsey. I can't wait to see how this turns out!

Hehe, Chuck Norris in a pink tutu? I can imagine that. I love "Isabella's" and Derek's 1st meeting. Have you ever read the Gallagher Series by Ally Carter? They are really good.

Ah, now I know who Isaac is. Wow, I'm only on the 2nd chapter and I already love it!