"I'm trying hard to keep my fire warm within..."

Maybe when I write that I feel that fire is like passion, and its really hard to keep it up. It's sometimes difficult to keep yourself writing. Now, at least, I have a better excuse than just 'making myself' do it. I have to get better, so I take my College Writing I course.

Yet, like in the college poem, it all just seems so futile. Everyone seems to be having such a more magnificent time than I, or some others that I know are.

I love your description of the match head. It's as if you see their dust through a veil of flame. Kudos again Shower.

I have to confess that I don't quite follow the contents of your poem, but the language and flow are good.

chocking choking

i don't get it but it sounds nice :)