|Reviews for Protat|
| Valkin 9/3/08 . chapter 1
"I'm trying hard to keep my fire warm within..."
Maybe when I write that I feel that fire is like passion, and its really hard to keep it up. It's sometimes difficult to keep yourself writing. Now, at least, I have a better excuse than just 'making myself' do it. I have to get better, so I take my College Writing I course.
Yet, like in the college poem, it all just seems so futile. Everyone seems to be having such a more magnificent time than I, or some others that I know are.
I love your description of the match head. It's as if you see their dust through a veil of flame. Kudos again Shower.
| Leonines Ishiko Fauxville 8/29/08 . chapter 1
I have to confess that I don't quite follow the contents of your poem, but the language and flow are good.
| damaged isolation 8/28/08 . chapter 1
i don't get it but it sounds nice :)