How deep. This is an interesting, realistic story. Outside the fluff and love of every romance story there is always the hard saddening truth. T__T Great, great story/one-shot!

Amazing... I am satisfied with the current length of this story. To me, the ending is like a Big Bang.

Okay, so I'm feeling really lazy. I was going to do just a little short no-quote review, because I'm feeling pretty down, but I just /had/ to comment on this line...

"It is as if they have a life of their own, a life you cannot learn to control."

This is beautiful.

"Your smile is my happy pill, my sun – this you will never know."

This too.

All of the last lines of each paragraph seem to be following a particular trend... They're all awesome, to put it simply.

Excellent job!

This is really relatable.

Really relatable.

fucking sad man. but a path many girls have been before. alas.

Lovely.

:'( that's so sad... :(

Y DOES HE HAVE A GIRLFRIEND? lol.
u shud have told me ur idea about my story b4!! == damn u!! lol

i might use it...

:( UR STORY IS STILL SAD THO :(

xx
Tess