Nicely done. (: The idea behind this piece could very easily have been cliche, but the way you have written it is anything but cliche. Good job.

~Unknown Survivor~

Aww, that was just gorgeous and very melt-worthy. I especially loved the first stanza and the last 2 - I found the second last one very easy to relate to.

This is so pretty and sad D: What inspired you to write this?