Very well written!

She killed her little brother, and herself too? Wow...I feel like crying. Your one-shots are so scary, but always so good. You did an amazing job. Was the main character depressed? Or was she just going crazy? But regardless, great work! :)

Wow.. That's pretty much how my mind is working these days. This is really good!
I can't wait for more.

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