 ZeektheBard 2008-09-14 . chapter 2Quite a long chapter, but rather nicely done. True, thus far Kaine seems insanely strong, but in most shonen stories first, main character battles are easy. I just hope you did plan challenges ahead of the Hidden Forest Seeker.
Overall not much to nitpick here.
Nice job. |
 ZeektheBard 2008-09-10 . chapter 1Finally I got some time to read this. Sadly, for the time being, I'll only manage to read the prologue, as I'll be off to bed in a moment, but at the very least I can write a word or two about it.
Overall I liked it. The setting seems interesting and I can't wait to see how you're gonna use it.
Plot-wise I can't say anything yet as it is still a prologue, but I can see this has potencial and I'll be coming back in the near future to read the first, actual chapter.
Until then! Bard is out. |