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Sexy Vampirechick 2008-11-25 . chapter 1
I love your story.It's really great.I liked it 'cause it was so deep,though it doesn't really mention who the characters were.But it was a bit cliched with the emo-ness of cutting herself.For some reason I think it's a girl.

One thing that bothered me was that you didn't capitalized your sentences and the "I". Was that intentional??Don't really get the point.
detache 2008-09-11 . chapter 1
I'm seriously loving your style. Your writing is beautiful and raw.

Keep up the amazing work.
fleur de l'est 2008-09-06 . chapter 1
Sensitive and colourful with sparkling adjectives, great imagery and atmosphere created. I especially like "months later, and i'm still tracing and retracing the contours forever etched into my skin". Really amazing metaphors. Also I liked the way you used no capitalisation whatsoever, it kind of makes it more personal.

~fleur
a certain slant of light 2008-09-01 . chapter 1
This is really... wow. It's got a poetic touch to it. I adore it. And while Paramore is definitely not my favorite band, the lyrics fit just right. Brilliant. *adds to favorites*
Blossomofdevil 2008-08-30 . chapter 1
I loved reading this , it made me really think about what your message was although it wasnt very Clear . I like the way you
put main words into Italics . You got me lost in some parts i was thinking different things . I love the message you brought across
to your readers especially Me . Well done

Keep Writing ~ :)

Love , Blossomofdevil .
x
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