I love your story.It's really great.I liked it 'cause it was so deep,though it doesn't really mention who the characters were.But it was a bit cliched with the emo-ness of cutting herself.For some reason I think it's a girl.

One thing that bothered me was that you didn't capitalized your sentences and the "I". Was that intentional??Don't really get the point.

I'm seriously loving your style. Your writing is beautiful and raw.

Keep up the amazing work.

Sensitive and colourful with sparkling adjectives, great imagery and atmosphere created. I especially like "months later, and i'm still tracing and retracing the contours forever etched into my skin". Really amazing metaphors. Also I liked the way you used no capitalisation whatsoever, it kind of makes it more personal.

~fleur

This is really... wow. It's got a poetic touch to it. I adore it. And while Paramore is definitely not my favorite band, the lyrics fit just right. Brilliant. *adds to favorites*

I loved reading this , it made me really think about what your message was although it wasnt very Clear . I like the way you
put main words into Italics . You got me lost in some parts i was thinking different things . I love the message you brought across
to your readers especially Me . Well done

Keep Writing ~ :)

Love , Blossomofdevil .
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