wow...this is great...

I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

LOl, sleeping with the enemy never a good thing right?

That was a really good chapter. I wonder why she helped him at all though, she didn't say she would.

You spelled deception wrong.
there is still some time period clash, like you use the phrase '** off' but that is a more recent phrase, so you should come up with something more in the time period you are aiming for. But, anyway,
THAT WAS AWESOME! I loved it! Write more PLEASE! I really really really REALLY want to know what happens next.

Semina

The story gets more interesting by every chapter I read! Good work, I'm anxious to see what happens next.

THAT is one of the best stories I have read on this site. I loved it.
You have a few errors in tense and spelling. I'm also confused about the time period. There are just a couple small things that suggest that it is in modern times, but most of it suggests the time period you are probably aiming for. Other than that, you have an awesome story. I added it to my favorites :)

Semina

what can that mean?

I love it! Can't wait for more.

me likey this story, great start!

Drakil? Intresting, I hope you are planing on continuing the story.