This is fantastic. Really, it is. One of the best things I've read on this site for a long time.

Nicely done. You can't tell that you're rushing, because the plot actually seems quite carefully planned out. I'm still smiling now.

Wow.

Wow, that was fantastic! I loved it, short and sweet, and Charlie was brilliant.) Curious, though, for someone as young as him to be mayor. Usually they're pretty old. Well...37 here. But anywho, I can see why they chose it, it was really, really good! Bravo!

A cannon shooting smiles in a sky full of rainbows!

Danielle)

Love it. Hilarious-I had a smile on my face all the way through. No, I couldn't really tell you were rushing. This was pretty well done, I think. Would've loved to've seen it performed. :)

Bye.

Wow, this is great. You can NOT tell you were rushing, and it'd be awesome to see as a real play, but apparently, this has already been done. sigh Sometimes you just can't win.

Haha. I wish that stuff I spent laborious hours over was nearly as good as your "rushed stuff". Ugh. No fair.

In case you couldn't tell, excellent.