Right off the bat, I think you meant "**" and not "hoar". ** is a noun that means "a promiscuous woman", and "hoar" is an adjective that means "grayish-white". Some of the lines in here were delicious. I think all the formatting (bolds, italics, etc) were unnecessary and distracting. But I really like it overall.

Oh wow, very nice work with this.

like a tale, it's kinda interesting, I think it's very powerful, specially the bold parts.

Okay, in poems I usually don't like the use of combining underlining, boldening, and italics, but this. was. amazing. It was very interesting, creepy, and the way it was written, how you boldened, italicized, underlined, and separated everything, I could feel Adam's anger so well, like everything should've been shouted.

But, there are a couple things you need to proofread. In the line "Had I the courage, i would drain every pint of youre blood from your pale figure I'd come to know so well," the i needs to be capitalized, and the 'you're' should be 'your.' There are also a couple places where the wrong kind of "there" is used.

Otherwise, fantastic job.

My Eve, naive. that's what came to mind. Even though that's kind of the opposit of what she is.
Beautiful. I loved this. Dark, bitter, a brewing storm at midnight. Scary, intense, fascinating.
Excellent!

I love it. (: I love your use of bold and underline and italic. It really adds to this piece.

~Unknown Survivor~

This one is... fascinating. It's dark, not depressing like most poetry, but dark. Edgy. And a bit creepy. I like it.