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The Ghost Drowned 2008-09-01 . chapter 1
Now, due to the fact that I found this morbidly hilarious by the end, I'm going to reivew for the first time in months. I usually have to sift through pages upon pages to find anything that interests me and happened to click this on the first page.

Great, absolutely great. Very unexpected and utterly ironic ending, a good writing style that was easy to follow along with, and I found it funny. So, guess what? You get faved.

Ghost
Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-08-31 . chapter 1
Well that was...unexpected. The whole story was, really.

At first I thought it was going to be someone on death row trying to buy some sympathy or make murder some twisted norm. And then i got to thinking, as I read it, that it's possible we all inadvertently kill someone else. But really, unless there's intent then I don't consider it murder.

Which got me to wondering, why does the narrator say he killed someone if all he did was tip her? Then it ended, and I was like...woah. Remind me not to upset this mysterious narrator.

Good job!
TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-08-31 . chapter 1
I don't judge you ^^
Nice story.

God Bless You
~Holli x
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