Hum, good to see you're still writing (wish I could get back into the groove myself!).

Very good poem. Very heavy impact with the use of creative use of words. Especially the grouping of the lines...

The stark contrast between body and mind you show at the beginning work well as two separate entities, that you put together as one in the end. That was just something I noticed.

Ah- Line 2 reads: "You mind is functioning fine." Judging from the first and third, seems that 'you' should be 'your'. Fiction Press tends to do that hehe (or it did back then)

whoa... i loved it...