I like the rhyming in this, as well as the words. It feels very peaceful, yet strong.

I love the image of wings - it makes me think of endless freedom. :)

Good, good, as I keep telling you. I still have to say I can't write poetry to save my life. Maybe you could teach me? Yeah, if you want a big headace. Keep writing.

Salima Master of Darkness

Great rhyming and message, grave and, in a way, formal.

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