what did he write in the mirror

Omg D: That sucks he was sent away. But i love the story :D

This was a cute story and I liked it even though it moved a bit too quickly for my tastes. The constant changing of POVs confused me at first but as you put some more order into it, it was much easier to read. Anyways, I thought you did a pretty good job and I enjoyed reading this. :)

That was a really cute first chapter but I think you should have emphasized why she didn't like him. It sounded mostly of "he's a dick". I still really liked this chapter though. I thought it was well-written and contained the right amount of details without overdoing or underdoing (I'm sure that's not a word...) it. :)

It is perfectly legal for step siblings to have a relationship, and I actually know a couple like that. they are happy and there parents are happy for them too. Although, they're engaged and it's going to be sort of weird for their kids to only have one set of grandparents, but hey, whatever floats your boat.

its not incest if ur step siblings

Oh my god. That was the most intense ending ever! I can't believe it's over!! Urgh. I am officially in love with that story. If only loved really worked that way...

Yay!! Another one of your stories! I just cant get over them, and how good they are. And...KEEP WRITING!

i would read the story! it seems really interesting!

i think that you could add in like a classroom scene or something?

i like how dougie is the golden boy in the parents eyes but totally evil. lol but what did he write on the mirror?

I KNOW THAT I AM KIND OF LATE BUT, I REALLY LUV THE STORY

I liked the story and I hope they stay together in the sequel.

hahahahahahaha!

lolomgwtfbbq!

XD at Nina's questions XD

'kay, when i read the summary, i was reminded that it's not incest if the two involved are step-siblings XD, so i clicked on it. so, yeah, i'm just gonna read on... great first chap btw!