That was so cute!

aww! how cute michael is such a sweetheart..

Aww, that was sweet...oh-so-adorable!

Ash

Aww cute :)
Can't wait for the sequel XD

That was cute as it could be! Loved it. :]

Thats! the end? No, must have more alex and michael!

Sad that's the end, I wish there was more! It works, though. Very sweet, especially the ending.

OMG! -huggles Alex && Michael plushies- I can't WAIT to read the sequel! WHO!

This was so cute. I loved it. I thought Alex and Michael's relationship was perfect for this story. Any thoughts of writing more? Like drabbles about them? :D

This is really funny, and you've managed to develop the relationships of the various characters so they seem really tangible. You know, like we're coming in the middle of a story. Update soon!

Ooh Alex is evil... but that just makes me love him more.

Michael must save Alex from the road to perdition! and stds! And I'm digging all of the sibling love, thats really cool.

hmm. This could be very interesting. I'm looking forward to what happens next!

Lately I haven't found many stories that intrigue me, but yours is definitely worthwhile. I really liked this first chapter and I can't wait to read more from you.

-Paige