   rara saryn 2009-11-06 . chapter 22Nasty |
 fusionbeam 2009-09-24 . chapter 21good chapter |
| rara saryn 2009-09-22 . chapter 21 I hope they get Aaron back alive |
| rara saryn 2009-08-31 . chapter 20 This is really good. I have enjoyed reading this story, and look forward to reading the next chapter |
| fusionbeam 2009-08-23 . chapter 20 very addictive story and not a bad stereo type one either :) |
 Avelseth 2009-02-17 . chapter 14wonderful new chapter I like hearing from Radon's perspective keep them coming |
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