 Priscilla Shay 2009-05-16 . chapter 1hi! It's cute...but I was a question
She opened the door, put the shake in the cup holder, and saw him in the rearview mirror...all of which leads me to believe she's in the car sitting in the driver's seat. But, then she slaps him (when's he at the back of the car) without getting out of the car. And then after her rant she gets into the car and drives off.
?? Did I misinterperate it or did you not mention something??
~P.S. |
 WalkingUnnoticed 2009-03-10 . chapter 1I really liked this story--reminded me of my current situation...hm. Good job! |
 LondonLi 2009-01-16 . chapter 1This is a marvelous mini-series you have going. I really hope you follow all the steps of their relationship. Marvelous job communicating her emotions. |
 LondonLi 2008-12-16 . chapter 1 I'm so pleased with their progress!! I hope you have the next installment out; any chance it'll be from his perspective. I'd love to figure out his thought process! |
 Dreamer's Denial 2008-09-03 . chapter 1This is amazing. I hope you continue it! |
 LondonLi 2008-09-01 . chapter 1 Thanks so much for this sequel! I love this little mini-series and can't wait to see the next move they make! Great job. |