the rhyme really hits the spot. Gives this piece that extra bit of energy and power.
Well done.

Wow ... I love it! Really. I really like the rhyme, did you do that on purpose?

-LoL

I wish I could write haikus. :p Nice work =]

I greatly like the expression in this Haiku. It was well-written, and stems very deep for a poem so short. Excellent job.

konnichi wa

This is quite possibly my favorite haiku from you. Ever. I have fallen in love. It's not just about the haiku or about the fact that this person can't seem to express herself, as implied from the "speech impaired." It's - I don't know... just... the imagery - wow! I seriously. No words to describe my love for this haiku.

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Ha det
-Shoshana-