|Reviews for The Heart Beats To The Melody Of False Pretences|
| Daydream Nation 12/6/08 . chapter 1
Sad, effective poem. I love it.
| Cole Kidler 10/29/08 . chapter 1
Absolutely love it. Its really amazing. Kudos to you.
| The Missing Prophet 9/5/08 . chapter 1
One of the nicest poems here!
Limited words yet full of meaning and inspiration.
| Scarlett Wynter 9/4/08 . chapter 1
I LOVE THIS.
I love the rhythm, the flow, the rhyming, the emotion, wording, EVERYTHING. ]
the last line seemed to throw of the rhythm ever so slightly, but whatever. I still love it!
| angels know the rest 9/2/08 . chapter 1
I love this poem. It summarizes my thoughts on love (although I have no idea if that's what it was supposed to be about) with lines like "a repetition of the pain last year" or "a melody to the lonely heart." My favorite stanza was the third, which flowed very well, although actually the whole poem did. I'll have to go read more of your poems.
| Isca 9/1/08 . chapter 1
"A melody to the lonely heart." It's incredible how certain cords of music can connect so well with us; enchant us; move us to tears :)
I think in the last line, 'infatuations' should be either: infatuation's or infatuations'.
Keep up the good work! :)