Ah Arthur, he is so adorable. And Patrick is so beyond obviously interested it isn't even funny. That was so funny, his realization when Patrick was like, "Yeah, I gave her your number and I'm not sure you wanted me to.." And Arthur was like, "I DON'T LIKE HER!" I love Arthur :p And I am on a roll. Boo-yah. I've been reading these stories all day. I found SerialXLain's account, read her stories, and I found your review, read one story, read 'em all... :3 I like how he's married, so it just makes Arthur more confused. Arthur is so cute!!

Poor Arthur!
I'm so uncomfortable for him every time he's around Patrick. And I feel so bad for him. I wonder why Allison and him broke up, hmm. And it was funny how you were like, "He didn't know how he could love anybody more than Allison. A lot more."
:/ And Fictionpress DOES eat words. I keep looking back at my reviews and yelling at the computer, saying something like, "There was a smiley there, bitch!"
I'll go read the next chapter now :p

Aww, Arthur is so cute in his little awkward way.

AHH! I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! AND YOU SHOULD UPDATE IT BECAUSE IVE NEVER READ ABOUT SUCH ADORABLE CHARACTERS! I LOVE LOVE LOVE ARTHUR AND PATRICK! patrick is so cute and he and arthur obviously got that sexual tension going on. hahaha. :)

you should update, seriously. this is too good to stop.
unless that's the end. but i hope not..alright then.


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hey, finally got around to reviewing it. i've already read it earlier, but something came up and i had to go out... but now i'm back. and i've gotta say i really like what i'm reading:) they have great chemistry and well, can't wait till SOMETHING happens:) pls update soon!

Karen is not subtle at all :P And Arthur is SO OBVLIVIOUS! Patrick has his work cut out for him. Poor guy. Aw, and Janey's still acting odd...hm... And I'm really curious about Oz! There seems to be something strange about that situation... Ah, poor Arthur. He's in quite the awkward position O_o But I'm sure it'll all work out!

I like this story so far. I'm hoping to see more of it soon.

=) Mandraco.

Great story!

So original :)

I like oblivious Arthur :)

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I'm just like Arthur when it comes to being late. D: It ruins the rest of the day. Totally throws me off. Icky. And the trashcan-missing. D: Whenever I'm mad and throw something, I always miss my target. We're kindred-spirits, Arthur and me...or I...or whatever.

I love how Arthur just ran away from Karen to the locker rooms when he got to the field. xD

Arthur's so cute and awkward. I think I love him. Or at least want to hug him very hard. And I love Patrick too. :3 He's adorable and obviously so jealous about Karen being close to Art.

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Aww you have to go and thank me and make me feel even more guilty! But aww your welcome, sorry I'm so shitty. Your writing is so amazing these days, every story just gets better and better. Not that it wasn't always amazing but yes.

Whoa. The review boxes thingy changed. Kind of scary.

ANYHOW! I love Arthur and Patrick...

I messed up Arthur's name. I just kept putting letters in his name the first time I typed it. It looked like Artheruene.

I looked at it and was all, "What?"

oh, i love it:) i really enjoy fics about older guys, like in college or working already, because i've been reading SO MANY about high school kids^^ i don't mean they're bad or anything, but it's nice for a change to read a piece like this. also, they both like women:) heh. but leaning towards men? or at least each other^^ impatiently awaiting an update!! (NOT nagging:)lol

I love it! Can't wait to hear more about Patrick. You've made him such a mystery. I think it's odd that Patrick didn't explain Oz. I'm always explaining my kids. One has Asperger's, one is painfully shy, one is kind of a foster child and the last is the most normal. As normal as it gets in my family. And it sounds like Arthur needs to have some epiphanies. Oh I can hardly wait.

Great beginning! Interesting couple. I like the emphasis on body language and non verbal communication instead of dialogue to tell the story. Can't wait for more! I'm guessing Art is going to get better at scoring eventually? :)

I do not know why it takes me so long to read something... but I did! And that has to count for something, if anything.

So, uh... I suck at reviews so I'll just say that I love Arthur. He's such a little weirdo.