Interesting story and metaphor: "The tide was back again. As he walked to the barn Hadeon allowed a small smile to appear on his face. The ebb tide would come again. And, even though nature had shown it's beauty to him many times he hoped that it would start to show around Jeremiah." fits the tone perfectly.

OMGOMGOMG. To say that I **' LOVED this is an utter understatement!! I love the characters and how it's written! Your bad **, totally sweet paragraphs of Hadeon's thoughts were TOTALLY cool!! It was incredibly well written. LOVE!!