NO! Please PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING! I don't care if the pub. won't publish u, WRITE! They're stupid not to publish it, FYI.

hi,
like you could already heare from other readers, your story is great and it is allways difficult to get something published.
But I will admite I liked the first better, than what the story line of this semes to be, but can't say whatever it realy would be like.
I hope you don't give up, becouse it realy would be something different. And I would buy it, although I know the story.( at least try- supose I could get it other amazone or so...)
May be read over it ons more, there might have been some things you could do better.
Good Luck
Leanna d W

That's a real shame. I always, always enjoy your stories. And did you know it takes most new authors years, and certainly many, many different rejection letters, until they finally get published?

I don't think you should give up just yet.

You are too talented and these stories--NOVELS--are just TOO GOOD to not be read by the world.

I'll certainly miss Ryan and Aleda, but most of all I'll miss you magnificent, glorious, talented, unique, and wonderouisly gifted writing.

It's been my dream for many a year now to have my own novel published, as soon as I end up completing it (it's currently 145 pg.s), and I know there'll be rejection letters abound.

Don't give up, please!

I'm not saying you should continue posting here if you really don't want to (it's not my place), but you are a very good writer, and I hope to one day see your world of Hunters and Light on the bookshelves or on Barnes & Noble dot com.

I know that I would buy a thousand copies and give them to all my friends. (keeping one or two for myself, of course)

-^.^-

Wonderfull!! Perfect start to the sequel--And I loved the chemestry you added in this chapter, especially.

The only thing is, I don't speak spanish (sadly), and its a little hard for me to get what they're saying sometimes. I've even tried putting it into a translation website, to no avail. Would you please consider translating for us non-spanish-speaking dorks as a A/N?

It's what I do with my fanfic on when they're speaking Romanian.

Thanks! The story's awesome!!

sorry, just need to add to my favourites :)

Oh. My. God.

How could you just stop writing?

This story was really good, I was already addicted!

All of this lemony sort of stuff had me laughing so hard, and Ryan's point of view is just fantastic!

I am really sad that you stopped writing, but if that is what you want...

I do wish you would reconsider finishing this story. I know you must be frustrated beyond belief, however there are those out there like myself that greatly enjoy reading your stories! I feel that you are a great weriter.

I'm sorry to hear about the publishing company but, i really hope you reconsider about letting this story go. Even though you don't get love from the publishers, you have a great fanbase here, and we're all waiting for another one of your great stories. I really loved madrugada and i was hoping that this would be just as good or better. then i run into you just about giving up on this story. i may not know you at all but, i do know what it feels like to just feel full of bad luck and i just wanted to say that you are a wonderful writer and your time will come and when it does i will be right there buying your books and reading all of them. i wish you well and i hope that you will reconsider putting this story on hiatus.

hoping for the best,
your devoted fan. :)

No! NO! Uve got to keep writing. I love ur stories. Besides, I need something interesting I can Loose myself in at least once a week. Also I've been waiting for updates on Echoes in the Twilight.
screw the publishers n just write bc u love to write.

Hey, sweetie.

It saddens me to hear (erm... read?) you so angry and basically calling it quits. Hopefully things turn better in the future, and while they don't... I hope you are able to write again for the plain joy of writing and not for the dream of getting published. In any case, I wish you the best of luck... some day I'm sure your dream will come true... but just give it time, ok?

Some advice from the scientific world: don't stay stuck on one thing if it's not giving you results, try a different approach. Maybe the Madrugada - Echoes in the Twilight - Amaneciendo books will be put on hold but that doesn't mean that if you come up with another idea, maybe that one WILL be published and that's your foot-in-the-door. Don't give up... have your talent, not your pride, guide you, ok?

I enjoyed reading your material and hopefully others will be able to enjoy it, too -- in paperback form. Until the time when anger leaves and you come back (with a burning vengence, right? -wink-), good luck!

Dani

Hi there...

Sorry it took so long to review. I think I've told you before that the new job I'm at has no internet... and I actually work onsite... so I only get to check my mail in the weekends.

I like this chapter... it's good to see Aleda finally on her own and hunting. Though I do have to say that I expect that a local artists/craftmen's market probably has pretty expensive prices for what Aleda is able to buy. Obviously we have to allow for some artistic liberties but realistically speaking... the cheapest Aleda will probably find are made-in-China wholesale clothing. Granted... she could probably find a street-ish market selling these in any Third World city; so if you want to stick to reality as much as possible, just tweeking a few words would do it.

Wow, I've been away for a while!
But I'm pretty much back and I must say that I'm really, really glad that you continued this story.
I fell in love with the characters in the first and well, this one is just as good so far!

Very good first chapter. I'm assuming they had a good night then. lol. Anyway, please update more because this story is awesome.

Darling!

It's wonderful to finally read this. Hehe... I see we're back to short chapters again... but that's ok =).

First... Ryan as the Organizer? Oh... poor him, I didn't see that coming! Otherwise... ep... a house to yourself with a sexy man sharing your bed every single night? Go Aleda... attack!

Now, on to the Spanish. It's about the title (because what Ryan said was quite well done). In the official title you wrote the word right: amaneciendo, but then when you were introducing the story and the in-text title, you mispelled it (changed the 'e' to an 'a'). Also... and this is out of purely pickiness' sake, amaneciendo is a verb, but madrugada isn't. Have you considered calling the story Amanecer (= dawn) so it follows the trend Madrugada left. Of course, you can't change Madrugada into Madrugando as the story title because madrugar (the verb) means to wake up early.

-shrug- Just a thought.