Wow this is absolutely beautiful.So sad. Awesome job. I love it.

aw no dont die

beautiful. I'm not one for oneshots but this was really great. Simple but perfect :)

Wow this is beautifully written.

Beautiful.

I really like the idea of using Death as the character.

oh my gosh. that was so wicked. I'm just wondering whether or not you would create a kind of short story for this. truly addicted. This is something I would bookmark and read over and over again. kudos.

this is such a sad story... i like the whole angle and devil set-up.

... that makes me sad :c

i adore stories about angels and demons. that is so heartwrenching and sad. i really would like it if you turned this into an entire story. if you wrote about it, like maybe how God created her to allow Satan to experience love and turn it into a full length novel. just an idea though. i thoroughly enjoyed this.

Evil fp...I had already reviewed but it didn't send cause of some tech glitch. Lovely. Oh well.

Last angel eh? Hm, has the Devil won the war? Lucifer rises again! lol! I love how he starts off cruel.

I'm watching Beauty and the Beast as I read this, or at least, having it play in the background, I need background noise and the movie was creating a fantasy mood for my writing. I decided to take a break and read this though. Anywho, I was at the end and just as Belle said "I love you" I read "You disgust me" and snorted my drink. LOL.

OMG. the kiss of death? :O

Oh no, kiss of love! She put a spell on him! She must have! >:O

Ah, now he's alone forever...karma right? XD

Lovely one-shot/drabble

SMOOCHES
MUCH LOVE

This has to be one of the MOST Beautiful thing's I have ever read you are a wonderful Writer/Authoress.
Keep up the Good Work!

Oh gosh, my heart is bleeding for the Devil. Even though he is terribly sadistic, I still feel bad for him.

awh that's so sad :(

tehe, I like this story, you;re a great author! :)
- Christina