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a day dream believer 2008-10-30 . chapter 1
i love your poems.

i always appreciate it when someone can articulate what I cannot.
the mask, the "should i receive punishment or praise," . . . . so true.

and whether or not anyone can make a difference. whether its worth trying, or if we're better off just putting up the front and making others smile.

so many things in the other poems really spoke to me too...
thank you for reminding me that sometimes other people really have the same thoughts.

-kerry
Unknown Survivor 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
Very nicely done. The concept behind this piece is one that I don't see often. Keep up the good work. (:

~Unknown Survivor~
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